Main Post Instructions
Write two or more paragraphs (at least 200+ words) on the following:
Paragraph 1
Please read all the comments you received on Essay 1. For help, review this tutorial on How to see Essay Feedback.Links to an external site.
Summarize some of the comments you received in the following areas: Introduction, Body Paragraphs 1 and 2, Thesis Unity / Essay Organization, Language
Paragraph 2
Rewrite one sentence from your essay in a way that reflects one of Dr. Kwa’s comments. Make sure to provide the original sentence as well.
Explain what you were trying to improve in your revised sentence. Refer specifically to the original comment.
Ask a question about essay writing.
Reply Posts (2 required, 50+ word each)
Respond to 2 other student’s main posts by answering these questions:
What parts of the other student’s main post could you relate to?
Do you think the other student’s revised sentence was better than the last? Why? Would you suggest additional changes?
Answer the other student’s main post concluding question about writing.